Aug 6, 2011 - On Writing    32 Comments

Were-jaguar heat in the jungle

This week I’m a bit more from “Lair of the Jaguar God” available from Liquid Silver Books. This one is a M/M romance with were-jaguars.

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Kit lay stretched out, his arm muscles taut as he pulled on the bonds that held him. His chest heaved with each breath, and each time he struggled against the bonds, the blood seeped around the edges of the wound.

Ah-Tabai moved closer, realizing that he should not have kept the room in darkness or he would have seen the signs of Kit’s distress earlier. He brushed the golden hair off Kit’s forehead. “You don’t need to struggle, Kit. We are in my home.”

Wide green eyes looked up at him. “Please untie me.”

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32 Comments

  • Ah, poor Kit. I think Ah-Tabai has a lot of work to do to gain his trust.

  • intriguing – curious to see how they resolved their differences

  • Intriguing six. There is a lot of description packed in here. Great stuff!

  • The snippets keep pulling me back. Another great six!

  • Aw, poor Kit! Hope he does get untied soon :(

    Great snippet!

  • It’s hard to come back from something like being tied up against your will. Looking forward to more!

  • Intriguing–makes me want to know more about how he got into that situation!

  • A very intriguing six with excellent detail. You certainly know how to weave a story.

  • Wonderfully intriguing, a great six indeed!

  • Poor Kit. Great description.

  • Oh – I need to know what happens! Great six!

  • Interesting! Does he untie him?

  • Great description. I love this. Very intriguing, nice emotion. I really want to know what happens…

  • Awesome six. :D

  • Poor Kit.

  • Fantastic six

  • Vivid description. On a side note, I’ve always loved that cover.

  • Oh, poor Kit!

    ~Xakara

  • Poor Kit! The description of the bonds and his blood made me cringe…which is good, of course, because it means the description was vivid! Great job!

  • I’m not thinking Kit is going to get untied just yet. Hmmmm…the possibilites of where this can go next has my mind racing! MORE please!

  • What kind of friend would keep him in the dark and tie him so tight he bleeds? Geez. Great description.

  • Hope he gets free soon. Nice 6!

  • Aww, hope he unties him.

  • I’m not sure what to think about Ah-Tabai — is he a good guy or not? Your six sentences sure make me want to read more!

  • Poor Kit. Great six!

  • Damn, what a spot to be in! Great six!

  • Poor Kit! How will Ah-Tabai make it up to him? Lick his wounds? Kiss them better? Love your sixes! :)

  • I’m with Sandy – is he a good guy or a bad guy…and which does Kit want him to be? ;)

  • Aw…poor Kit!

  • Awesome! I love jungle stories. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

  • So if he cares so much about Kit, why is Kit tied up?!

  • Untie him quick! Those lovely green eyes…!

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